Essay plan editing analysis

My main target of improvement was analysis of editing, this would hopeful get me up a full grade.

Prominence is a key aspect of editing, if a character had more time in screen they are more prominent, which could show power and authority. If they opposite was to occur (lack I screen time for a character) they are perceived as weak and powerless.

Editing depends on the stereotype you are trying to display, for example if you were trying to portray a more feminine character you would include soft fades between scenes. You would also colour grade brighter colours. If there was a more masculine character you would use whip pans or cuts, and use darker colours

Sympathetic or victim characters would be edited from their point of view to the audience pieties them.

Masculine editing would be more fast paced and frantic whereas females would be slower as they tend to dither more

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Note taking 15th January

Sexuality

Peter Sherlock conclusion

'Gay.. Ehm, hey,' clip and 'He's not!' from Sherlock show sexuality between characters in very different ways. In the clip the character of Moriarty is acting in an extremely feminine way stereotypically in a 'gay' fashion. His flirting towards Sherlock and has low tone to his voice when he say 'hi' to Sherlock in a shy little school girl way backs up the gay stereotype, other aspects of the meis-en-scene such as his low cut tight t-shirt, also his underwear and how he has used eye-brow tint as Sherlock mentions back this up. All of these things leads Sherlock to the assumption that Moriarty is 'gay'. All of these assumptions made about Moriarty from this clip completely juxtapose with Sherlock. As the clothe's Sherlock wears are very masculine as they are dark colours and very formal also he is working in a lab which I a very masculine location as science is linked in with intelligence, which is a highly masculine trait also he seems completely uninterested by Moriarty towards him. Personally I think Sherlock is defiantly straight, but there is a possibility that Moriarty could be gay, or because the time we live in the could also be classed as a post masculine male, as you do not see him perform in any sexual act's that could confirm he is gay.

Toby Improvement

Peters improvement

Toby's

Mock Analysis

Toby:E/A/A Low level 3- More relevant to stereotypes
          EX Low level 3- More comparison
          T 4 low level 2- Better understanding of terminology, wider range

To improve on the accuracy of points. Only have one mis en scene point, add camera sound and editing.  Mentioned the camera is on a high angle but not who it is on. Improve handwriting. Analyse all of the sequence.


Pete:E/A/A low level 3- Cut down the length of essay
        EX low level 4- Better relevant points
        T low level 2- Better terminology

Have to be more specific on certain points. Talk about gender more. Analyse more instead of describe.